I've been thinking, recently, about how slowly the entire story has been to coming together, and I have to admit. You guys who thought it was pacing too little, you're right. It hasn't been going fast enough in some ways, but...I haven't been able to write enough per chapter to add in all the details and so forth. What's more, I've been thinking of what to add in to Part I to make it compelling enough, especially concerning Haru's characterization growth and the character development of the others. Gokudera, Yamamoto, Ryohei and Hibari, especially.
Tsuna, as far as I am concerned, is going to be changing drastically in here. First off, his perspectives on the people in his family will be evolving, as well as his ideas of what it means to be a mafia boss and what it means to lead the life he has gone through. Status quo is something he holds onto dearly like a life support, but he is soon going to find out that it isn't what he thought it was. Especially when it concerns Kyoko and the boring life he has led up to when Reborn came into it. XD
As for Gokudera...he is probably going to have to deal with the realization that being the Right-Hand Man means that he needs to know the family members well, not just choose people and pick out their flaws in ways. The thing is, he has a good team in some respects and a lot of potential in himself and his friends, but he doesn't realize it. That is what makes him challenging.
Yamamoto and Ryohei, however, are the real challenges here in some ways. The two of them don't know they are in a mafia world or anything of the sort. The thing is, they want to protect, but to do that in the world of the mafioso and cosa nostra, they will be dealing with a lot of murders and assassinations, and that might make it difficult for them to come to terms with things. What I want is to develop them plausibly and at the same time make sure they don't betray anyone without good reason.
Hibari is the last and not the least at all. He is anti-social, and this makes it difficult to interact with him or force him to realize things, but eventually he will need to be hit in the head with a stick on how he needs to team up with people anyhows in ways to protect the ones he cares about. Even though he is anti-social, I can sense a form of desolation he has grown used to and holds onto like an iron fist.
Chrome...dear, dear Chrome. She is definitely an interesting one here. She has the potential of a real Mist fighter, a very powerful lady and a beautiful character as well. She has the background and the isolated personality to make her a very fascinating combination, and this can make her a strong point to help out Haru and Tsuna to change their attitudes on how to work things. However, she will also need to realize that Haru has more similarities to her than she realizes in order to become closer to the other girl.
So, anyways, that's what I'm dealing with so far. Fare thee well, for a bit at least. -waves-
Primal Red
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